Teaching the Non-Traditional Canon Work.
Assignment #1
Postcards
and Change
Change
is everywhere. My plan with these postcards was to show the different ways you
can view change in the world around you, even if all of the images come from
one room. In these postcards I show change by using repetition, transformation
or fantasy, and text. When viewed by themselves they convey change in one
specific way. However, when viewed all at the same time the message is
strengthened.
The
first postcard I made deals with change through repetition. For this postcard I
have a line of pool cues all in a row. In Photoshop, I cut and pasted different
sections of the image. Once I pasted the cut section I would flip it
horizontally so it would line up perfectly with where I had just cut it. I
repeated this action of cutting, pasting, and flipping over and over again
until I got to a point where I felt the image was visually stimulating. Then,
in the mist of all of the traditional, wooden pool cues there is one that is a
bright orange cue. The abrupt change in the images repetitions causes the
viewer to stop for a moment. In that moment, the viewer has to deal with the
change I am presenting to them. How they process the change will be different
for everyone and it could be a positive or negative reaction depending on the
person.
In
my second post card I deal with fantasy through transformation. Here I took an
image of the pool tables and transformed the surrounding area and tabletops.
Inside the pool hall there is a red glow to the place. This red light comes
from the light reflecting off of the red wall and the light shades. This red
glow is a little bit like the red glow you can get from a sunset. Therefore, I
decided to change the red wall of the pool hall to a beautiful sunset. I then
used the table light to cover up the sun in the image to make it look like the
sunset was coming from the table light. The change between the natural light
and the artificial light can cause someone to view the space in a different
way. Also, I changed the tabletops from the green felt to an image of the
wooden floors at the pool hall. My hope was to make the viewer relate them to a
boardwalk you might walk on while viewing a sunset. The wooden tabletops can
also cause the viewer to think about how a wooden tabletop would change the way
you would have to play pool, or how impossible it would be to play on a wooden
tabletop.
Lastly,
in my third postcard I deal with how text can change an image or change the way
you think about the image. In my postcard I interlaced the words “what we meet
along the way changes us forever” in the felt on the pool table. In this image
I also have the cue ball lined up to hit the racked balls at the end of the
table. That first hit by the cue ball starts the game and depending on how it
hits controls the rest of the game. Through the words in my image, I am trying
to relate the way the ball’s direction will change when it encounters another
ball to the way humans can change when they encounter other people in their
lives.
Whether
we are experiencing change, creating change, or reacting to change, change is
everywhere. What is really important is what we do with the change we find
along our lives. Change is not always good but if one really tries they can use
the change to produce good.
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Postcard 1-Repetition |
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Postcard #2-Transformation |
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Postcard #3-Concealment/Revealing |
Assignment #2
Uncontrollable
Change
Through life there are many
ways your life will change. Some of these changes you control. Like, when and
who you marry, if you are going to have kids, what college you go to, and many
more. There are also many changes you do
not get to control. Like, when you are
born or when you die, what the weather is going to be like, how someone else
might be acting from one day to the next, and others. It is the changes we cannot control that
enticed me to create this short animation.
In this short animation I
look at how the weather changes over and over again no matter what. To show
this change I took one scene (a tree in a field) and never changed it. I never
changed the tree and field to show that even if we stand still change happens.
Even if it is just the weather, change is a constant. For the animation, I
started off with leaves on the tree changing from green to red, showing the
fall season. After the leaves all fall off the tree I have the grass turn to
white and snow start to fall from the sky, showing the winter season. Once all
the snow has fallen I turn the grass back to green and buds form on the tree. To
show the last season of summer I wanted to have the buds fade into leaves but I
could not figure out how to do that. Therefore, at the end of spring the buds
just immediately become leaves. Lastly,
I repeated all of the four seasons over again to show the repetition of the
seasons.
For the sound I recorded
myself reciting the poem “Life” by Sir Walter Raleigh, “What is our life? A
play of passion,
Our mirth the music of division,
Our mother's wombs the
tiring-houses be,
Where we are dressed for this short comedy.
Heaven the
judicious sharp spectator is,
That sits and marks still who doth act amiss.
Our graves that hide us from the setting sun
Are like drawn curtains when the
play is done.
Thus march we, playing, to our latest rest,
Only we die in
earnest, that's no jest.” I felt like this was a nice poem about life and
death and brings a feeling of uncertainty about death into closer view. I
recorded the sound in a field to get the sound of nature, mainly wind, into the
recording as well. I also recorded the sound in my bathroom where I would have
better acoustics and no background noise. I went with the recording from my
bathroom and edited it in Soundtrack Pro.
Through the big idea of change, I
think it is equally important to look at what changes you have control over and
those uncontrollable changes. Many times in life we just focus on the changes
we can control, we do not always like to think about not having control. This
animation brings together two elements in life that we have no control over.
iMovie Artist
Statement
Discrimination is everywhere and especially in
schools. Every year students commit suicide due to bullying. Actually, suicide
is the third leading cause of death among young people. Also, NBC News stated,
about 160,000 kids stay home from school every day because of fear of bullying.
There are both physical and emotional forms of bully. Both forms of bullying
are armful to the victim.
Now with the Internet, students don’t even have to
be at school for bullying to happen. Students, or anyone, can find bullying on
Facebook, Twitter, and other online sites. It can seem to some that there is
nowhere safe to go.
We decided to draw attention to this very
serious issue in a more comical way. Although red heads might not really find
the bullying they receive for being a ginger too much to bare, no one can know
what one person can handle before it gets to be too much. The anonymous ginger
in our newscast states that she really didn’t have a hard time in school, but
she may not be the norm. Whether bullying is happening to some one too fat, too
skinny, gay, or because the color or their skin or hair, bullying is not okay.
We wanted to make a video that related to the students lives.
Like stated above, bullying is a constant issue
among students and we wanted to draw attention to the fact that it is a bad
thing. On top of it being hurtful, it makes the bully look like a fool more
than the bullied. The strategies in which we tried to accomplish our goal and deliver
the right messages include: making the short video a comedy. The humor allows
the students to enjoy the video while still discussing a difficult subject.
Overacting in our newscast allowed us to demonstrate the ridiculous behavior of
the bully.
Making it a newscast makes the information seem
more important because information on the news is important and should be taken
as such.
We used iMovie with it newscast setting to make our newscast. We
didn’t want to be associated with any real news group so we made up our own,
WXYZ News. Through using iMovie’s editing film and sound clips we were able to
make the whole film move smoothly.
To make our film clip seem more realistic we
watched other newscasts and PSAs. We also watch some Daily Show with John Stuart
and Anchorman to see how to best make our new clip comical and yet stay in the
newscast genera.
In the perfect world at a perfect time, bullying
would not exist, but it does. Our only hope is that we could draw attention to
this serious issue and stop it. Raising awareness is the first step; the next
is to take action. Our video is intended to spark something within the viewer
to get them thinking about bullying and all the things they can do to stop it.
Hopefully they will be inspired to take action.
Here are some examples of my 3 dimensional art work.
These are images of a balsa wood assignment in my first year of art classes at GVSU. We had to make five different sculptures that could be compelling on their own but also fit together in a group. Each sculpture needed a different requirement. One needed to have a found object. One needed to focus on mass. One needed to have simplicity. One needed to have a balance of inside/outside space. One needed to have a directional force.
Found object
Simplicity
Mass
Inside/Outside
Directional Force
For this assignment we were given one 1"x 4"x 4' piece of pine. We were then asked to find a way to expand that piece of wood. I chose to expand my piece of wood by cutting my wood down and carving the wood into different little humans. Than I walked in a line dropping one wooden human with each step. My goal was to show how we leave a little bit of us behind in the past.
For this assignment we were asked to find a place in the building to build up an object around showing the negative space of that area and a piece of your body.
For this assignment we needed to think of a man made object and create it into a neckpiece or a hat. The art created needed to be sewn and also needed to use bits of material from a stuffed animal. I chose a hanger and to create a neck piece.
Here are some of my Drawings.
These next 2 drawings are based the artist Kettering. He shows the progression of time through drawing and erasing and then drawing over the erased marks.
































Please change your font it is impossible for us old folks to read.
ReplyDeleteYour big idea, change, is conveyed in an interesting way. Your choice of location is interesting, and your images are engaging. Your initial photography skills really help to make your final projects work well. The technical alterations are done very cleanly and convincingly in the majority of your work. The use of one red pool stick in your first postcard is very straight forward and subtle at the same time.
ReplyDeleteI think that your second postcard becomes a little confusing where the wood is placed on the table tops. Maybe if the colors/contrast was altered a bit it would become better integrated and more convincing.
Big idea= change
ReplyDeletethe visual repetition strategy that you used in the first postcard in stunning. you also used your technical skills in photoshop very well in the second postcard, it definitely brings out fantasy and mystery.
i think the idea of change is great in relation to the aspect of playing pool.. like in the third postcard. change is shown in all of the postcards but i really enjoy the first postcard on repetition, it shows change in a subtle way and turns almost abstract.
You did a very good job applying your idea as a whole AND specifically to each postcard. You had a focus, organized your ideas, and executed them is a very successful way. Each image is carefully thought out, and makes me think. I really appreciate how you have a reason for each decision you made. the first and last images are the most successful. The pool table wood on the second image has a perspective issue, but is overlooked because of the landscape scene on the back wall. I think that each image drew me in, and makde me analyze why you made each move. I really enjoyed your series!
ReplyDeleteThe big idea for your postcard project was change, but the fact that you had several sub-ideas within the set of images was something I did not think about before. However, I am not sure if this was something that helped or harmed your project. In a way, it made it hard for me to connect your projects to each other or really see where change was present without some discussion or description provided.
ReplyDeleteThe most interesting image to me was the repetition piece. This may or may not be because I am interested in patterns. One aspect of the piece that may need consideration is the coloring of the one pool cue, because I didn't even notice it was a different color. I think this was due to the fact that it almost matched the background coloring.
Your other two postcards were very interesting as well. For the third postcard, I was curious if the placement of the text would change (haha) how we read the image. Would putting the word "change" in the middle of the image, or making it so we can see the whole quote at least once, would make a difference. We discussed this, and I don't think it is a problem. I am just curious how the different positions would alter the image as a whole.
Hahaha...Mark's comment...
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I think that your postcards are really well crafted! Everything is seamed together really well, especially your first postcard. Nothing seems starkly copy and pasted. Your statement is really well written as well.
However, I am still a little confused as to how "pool" and "change" relate to each other. I understand the big idea after reading your statement, but I think it would be nice if I could get a little better hint at the big idea by the images alone. Also, it would be nice if the viewer would be able to read the whole statement in the last postcard.
I really enjoy the first postcard just as an image though, ignoring big ideas. Repetition really does have a sort of odd beauty.
Happy Friday!
Hi, Alicia. How are you? The first postcard works well visually as a small image. I couldn't tell there was repetition, just thought it was a lot of pool cues. The larger image, however, has a bit of a quality issue. Also, a white line on top caused by accidental cropping. Red pool cue is nice, always a fun thing to do when showing repetition.
ReplyDeleteThe second one suffers a little because the two images don't look like they fit together. The cutting and pasting has been done well but the atmosphere and lighting on each image is very different and off sets the composition as a whole. The shelves are fuzzy and the sea background isn't, that's what really sets them apart.
The third one is Fan-Tas-Tic, simply beautiful. The phrase is used incredibly well here in concept, especially speaking toward the game of pool. Each impact from one ball to the other changes everything drastically. Again, very nice on the third one.
Thanks Chris. I enjoyed your comments and I am a little crazy in the head today. but I will get sleep in December and then everything will be fine. How are you?
DeleteI really visually enjoyed the image the repition of the pool sticks created on the first postcard. The text on the pool table was interesting and played well the the image. The subtle but interesting changes in the second postcard were nice, but I thought that it could have visually been stronger. I also think that the concept of change could have been better illustrated through the photos as a group somehow.
ReplyDeleteAlecia! Your first image is awesome! The repetition is great and has created an awesome image The colors turned out cool and almost looks like just reflected light, but it is so much more than that. Your sunset image connects to the colors and change of the wood table tops is a good idea and successful "change." Also the 3rd postcard trying to reveal something was done well with repeating the words. The idea of the ball having to roll over all of the bumps to get to the other balls could symbolize all the bumps along the way we have to make when we are making changes.
ReplyDeleteOverall, Your first is my favorite. It is so subtle but the image is so intriguing! The idea of change has definitely been portrayed and I don't think that you need your explanation to help you out in this case.
1. Change
ReplyDelete2. Change as a dynamic force
3. Your repetition image is by far the strongest, the sucky pool cues repeated over and over is interesting. Like an orphan that no one wants, they stay lock in stasis, and in their exclusion. Your text image could be pushed further in that the repetition of the words is problematic to the overall composition, as it is a hammer that repeatedly beats us with the same message.
I was really intrigued with how you decided to use a pool hall to explore the idea of change. Im not sure if I specifically got that idea from the postcards, however. I thought of "alteration" more than "change".
ReplyDeleteThe most effective postcard was your third one because it relates the motions of the balls with the idea of change or chain reactions. It would be better if the words were easier to read, though. We can see the word "change" which is most important, but we do not get the full idea when we cannot read the full sentence.
The subtle change in the first postcard makes me think about subtle changes in life. It is obvious that there are a ton of cues, but that may distract the viewer from seeing the one that is different. This can relate to life in an interesting way. Sometimes we do not even notice change.
Overall I thought it was interesting how you presented your images in a way that leaves a lot of room for interpretation. You seemed less concerned about everyone getting the main idea, but encouraged the viewer to respond in whatever way they please.
Hi Alicia :)
ReplyDeleteYou are working with ideas of change, and I think that your first postcard works really well to show subtle changes from a formal perspective. It looks like a purely visual piece, and so I like that it takes a little bit to recognize them as cues. Your second image is interesting to think about how the changes you made to the image change not only how the game is played but also the atmosphere of the pool hall. I do agree with you that the light seems kind of centered in the image, so the composition might have been better. For the third image, I think the text works really well as a repeated element, but it is hard to read the first and last words, and while we have discussed that the main words are in the middle, I think that saying “what” versus “who” as the first word makes a big difference, and I might have assumed it was “who” if you hadn’t said it.
Alicia,
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job transitioning from season to season. I love the fact that yours is in complete color - props to you for that one! I thought the sound was an interesting choice, it added a depth to the animation that would not have been there otherwise. I think that there is a seriousness in the voice that does not match up with the playful, colorful nature of the video, though. Otherwise, you did a great job! 3 thumbs up!
Understandably, I think your animation could use a little more work. Some of the transitions are a little rough, like you described in your explanation. However, I know you were having difficulty with it and what you ended up with is still good.
ReplyDeleteI think the strongest aspect of your animation is your sound selection. That poem brings the piece to a whole new level. I am not sure you could have gone as far with your project without such an interesting selection to read from.
3 thumbs
I like your layout, and overall design of your animation. The seasonal changes occur smoothly, and your color and shapes are very pleasing. I would say to try and make the audio clearer just so the audience can understand and relate those words to the animation. Overall, I enjoyed watching your animation.
ReplyDeleteFor the animation, Im not quite sure if I caught your big idea while watching it. I think it would have been a lot better if I could hear the poem, but from what I saw I only thought of seasons. So I did think of change, but strictly in the sense of seasons/weather/years.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made the grass wiggle, almost like wind blowing. Some of the transitions could have been done a little smoother though.
Overall I would also give you 3 thumbs because of the potential it has. Pairing it with a poem is creative and this video could apply to alot of different interpretations.
:)
The only real critique I have for your animation is so that we can understand and/or hear the poem a bit more. Hearing this poem along with seeing the animation is a good connection, but we may not realize it at first. Its a good approach rather than just using music like most of us did. The animation turned out well with your seasons; they are definitely portrayed very well. I understand the connection of the big idea of change with your animation. It is obvious with the season changes! I also love the contrast between the animation the semi morbid poem reading. 3.5 thumbs up!!
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ReplyDeleteI thought that pairing this with a poem was a really creative idea - I only wish I could understand the poem. Because I think relating the poem to your piece is essential, I'm not sure the video works so well for me...I just see it as an animation of the seasons, without much deeper meaning or bigger idea behind it.
Hey, hey, Alicia! What's up?
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the animation! I thought everything came together well and you get the idea across both visually and vocally. That bit of poetry was well written and very fitting. Now the big problem I had with your animation comes in the fact that it repeats itself. I would have enjoyed seeing either a slower transition in the seasons or different aspects of the seasons a second time around. Basically you made a short animation and repeated it to match the poem instead of cohesively working with each and developing a final product. 2.75/4 thumbs and the like. Probably has hands with it too.
Your iMovie was great. I love the use of humor. Whats really funny about the whole thing is that the way you two shot, framed and acted was exactly how they do in "real" informational videos. I thought of all the ridiculous videos I saw through-out K-12 and am glad that you two used the style in a satirical way. Nice Work :)
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